My Version of Indy Movies (with me!). I know it sounds corny but just PLEASE READ IT, CHECK IT OUT!!!

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Posted by Ben, friend of Indy from integrityonline30.com on September 25, 1999 at 08:29:09:

OK, here's the deal, I started "..and the Quest for the Tomb" but I guess it pretty much bit the dust, I mean nobody's been begging me to do it or anything. SO, I thought up versions of Raiders and Last Crusade (Temple of Doom wouldn't work because 1. I haven't seen the whole thing. 2. I haven't seen what I CAN see of it in a while.)with me. They're kinda different because with me being a 9-year-old kid partnering Indy, there are going to be some changes, and for another thing, it's on my view, so... I'd also like you to know that I'd like people to not add on to it, and also, it's gonna be in parts for each version. I'll cut the small talk and get to Raiders.

Raiders of the Lost Ark
Part 1
We were in Peru, 1936. Indy was looking for some gold head whatcha-mi-call-it. But I knew with the risks he was taking, as usual, it must be valuable and stuff. We had two Peruvian guides, Satipo and Barannca. They both seemed pretty suspicious, but I didn't like Barannca at all. Indy was wearing khakhi pants, a tan-ish shirt, a brown leather jacket, a fedora, and a bullwhip, that's basically what he was wearing besides shoes. Me, I was just wearing a white T-shirt and khakhis, basically. We trudged down a plant and moss-covered mountain and stared at the rockier one up ahead for a moment, then we turned a little northern and a lot eastern. I looked down at the muddy river down between us and the rocky mountain. I hoped I wouldn't have to swim in it.
In a little bit we reached another forest and Barannca called back to the other Peruvian guides with donkeys and supplies to hurry up. Eventually, we reached a tree with a thick, wooden needle in it. Indy picked it up and rubbed the red area in front. "Poison." He told me, then dropped it on the ground. Then me and Indy kept going, so did Satipo, Barannca, and the guides. Finally, still in the forest, we all reached the river. As he was tying his donkey to a tree, a guide found a small rock statue carve into a wierd face with it's tongue sticking out. The guide shrieked a bats flew out of the mouth and he led the rest of the guides besides Satipo and Barannca. We stared off into the distance as if to call them idiots. Indy then walked to the river again and pulled two pieces of old paper from his bag and put them together. It was a map. As Indy looked at the map, Barannca pulled his gun out and aimed it straight at Indy. I saw this and ran at him and pushed his hand up in the air and he accidently shot a branch of a tree. We both ran a bit from the branch. Indy heard this and quickly spun around and lashed his whip and it wrapped around Barannca's hand and gun. Barannca fought the whip but Indy pulled it as the gun flew from Barannca's hand into the river. Barannca ran, holding his hand. Indy glared at him. Indy put the map back in his bags and walked up a nearby hill it had a small square stone entrance and a little pile of sand on top of a block. Me a and Satipo ran up to him. "This is it," Indy said, piling sand into a smaller bag and tied it back up. "This where Forrestall cashed in."
"A friend of yours?" Asked Satipo.
"No, my competitor." Indy replied. "He was good. He was very very good." Indy said with a sigh. Then we walked in.

If you liked it, then please respond and tell me, I'll write Part 2.
"Okie Dokie, Dr. Jones. Hold on to your potatoes!"--Shorty, Indiana Jones and the Temple of Doom.



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