Re: VERY nice!!!!!!!!:-) (nm)

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Posted by Ulla from 118.oak01.pon.net on October 09, 1999 at 13:54:26:

In Reply to: Raiders of the Lost Ark Part III (by Ben, friend of Indy) posted by Ben, friend of Indy on September 28, 1999 at 07:45:10:

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: Raiders of the Lost Ark
: Part III
: We started walking slowly a bit. Satipo started to run. "We must hurry. There is nothing to fear here!!" he shouted. Indy chased him a second, pushed his fist and arm sideways, and landed Satipo to the wall by the chest.
: "That's what scares me." Indy replied. Indy nudged us to move down as he crouched. The whole floor was a pattern, thin bricks outside, big thick bricks between. Indy took a burnt out torch and placed it over one of the big bricks. He pulled off some moss with the torch and then covered it back up. He made a face that completely said, "Typical." "Stay right here." he said, pointing down at us.
: "If you insist, Senor." replied Satipo. Indy's fingers twitched a moment and he walked forward. He followed the pattern, avoiding the big blocks. The whole surrounding was spooky. Detailed faces carved into the rock walls appeared to eerily smile and make faces at Indy. Up nearer to the pedestal appeared to be a statue of a giant figure wielding an ax. Indy got a step away from a mossy hill when he suddenly slipped. Satipo stood up quickly and grimaced, but Indy got high up to the moss and began the minute long journey that seemed like forever. Indy was barely a few feet away from the hideous head. After what, like I said, seemed like forever, Indy finally reached the pedestal. He crouched down again to eye-level with the pedestal and pulled out the smaller bag and pulled a handful of sand out. He let the sand slip through his fingers slowly. Eventually he just threw all the sand in his hand away. He tied the bag again and put it in his left hand. He put the bag and his hand near the head. Satipo was wiping his thumbs and fingers together. Almost there...almost...Indy was breathing hard. Suddenly with a light speed action, he switched the bag for the head. Indy sighed a breath of relief as did Satipo. I nearly fainted. Indy adjusted his hat proudly and walked back... When all of a sudden he heard a rocky OUGGGGOUGGGOUGGG sound and me and Satipo saw the top portion of the pedestal go down with the bag. Indy looked back and the stones apparently making a dragon face started crumbling. Then it seemed like dirt and rocks were falling everywhere. Indy stuffed the gold head under his armpit and ran for it. Darts spewed dirt and poison at Indy but he was too fast. Satipo looked back and ran to the pit. I chased him back. By the time I reached him he had gone over and the whip fell with the branch. Satipo looked down at the whip and then to the other side, Indy came back. "Satipo, throw me the whip!" Indy called.
: "Throw me the idol, I throw you the whip!" Satipo replied. Satipo looked back, a door was slowly going down. "No time to argue!" Indy threw the idol hopefully. Satipo caught it and just dropped the whip, grinning. "Adios, senor." He ran to the entrance.
: "Get on my back." Indy said to me.
: "Okay, I hope I'm not too heavy." I replied. I climbed up as fast as I could.
: "You're too heavy."
: "Bummer."
: "Look, I'll jump over and while I'm doing that, jump and see if you can catch my back."
: "Uh, okay." Indy jumped over and caught on to a straw vine in the floor and tried to pull himself up. I jumped over and just barely caught on, Indy fell a bit.
: "Indy, I'm gonna try to climb up on top and get you."
: "Nah, save yourself, kid. Jock is waiting at the river, he'll pick ya up." I ignored him and pulled myself up. I put my leg up on top and pushed down and got myself up. Indy watched me go back a little towards the entrance and thought I was going back. But I crawled under the door and quickly put the idol under the door! Indy was pulling desperately. In a second, he was up! The door almost reached the idol, but we finally crawled under. I grabbed the idol and started running. I heard Indy say, "Adios Satipo." And I assumed he had been killed.
: "Come on, Indy!" I shouted.
: "Okay!"
: He ran to me and I started running again. Indy looked back and from the giant hole, a boulder chased after us!! We ran as fast as we could. The boulder almost got us, but we ran harder. Almost there! We finally jumped out, rolling down the hill. When we landed right side up, we saw a bunch of Hovitos pointing bows and arrows at us. When we looked over, we saw Barannca, just standing there, expressionless. A Hovito pushed him down, exposing several needles in his back. Then Indy's arch rival, Rene Belloq.
: "Dr. Jones. Again we see there is nothing you can possess which I cannot take away. You chose the wrong friends. And this time it will cost you." Belloq said reaching for something. Indy pulled his gun out from its holster. The Hovitos stretched the bows and arrows. Indy turned the gun so the handle faced Belloq, then they backed off. "And..." Belloq said, reaching again. As Indy dug out the head, he talked to Belloq, "Belloq, it's too bad they don't know you the way I do."
: "Too bad. You could warn them, if only you spoke Hovito." Taking the head, Belloq spun around, raising the artifact. "Wakanamatuso, nomata!" The Hovitos bowed at this. Indy and I took the advantage and squeezed it hard. We ran as the Hovitos were bowing. Next thing I heard was Belloq's laughing echoing in the jungle. We ran harder than when we were chased by the boulder. The Hovitos began chasing us. They ran as fast as they could with barefeet, which is not very fast. We past some donkeys. Then more jungle, then open space. I looked back at the Hovitos. We were well out of range for them to shoot at us. We could see the cliff. Indy called to Jock, the pilot of the plane that took us to Peru.
: "JOCK! START THE ENGINES!! GET 'EM UP!"
: We reached the cliff to find Jock fishing. "Jock, start the engines!"
: Jock saw us and went to start the engines. VROOOOMMMM the propellors went. "This time, you can get on my back." I climbed up on his back. He grabbed the vine, swung, and jumped in the yucky water. I'm glad Indy was a good swimmer. The Hovitos reached the cliff and started shooting at us, but we already reached the plane and I was comfy in Indy's lap. Soon a boa constrictor started moving up our legs. Indy grimaced and looked back to Jock. "There's a BIG SNAKE in the plane, Jock!"
: "Oh, that's just my pet snake, Reggie!" Jock replied.
: "I hate snakes, Jock, I hate 'em!"
: "Come on, show a little backbone, will ya?"
: "AHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!"
: To be continued....
: "Okie dokie, Dr. Jones. Hold on to your potatoes!"--Shorty, Indiana Jones and the Temple of Doom




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