Remnant's of the Dark World Order chapter XVII

Posted by Short Round from 1Cust226.tnt3.fort-lauderdale.fl.da.uu.net on October 16, 1999 at 11:05:58:

Chapter XVII
The downed pilot got up. He grabbed his gun and ran after Jerico and Michaelson. He fired a few shots which ricocheted off the crates. Michaelson and Jerico ducked as debris flied around them. Their pursuer reloaded after the many shots. Jerico and Michaelson stopped, out of breath.
ìJerico, run!î Michaelson commanded.
ìAnd leave you here?î Jerico replied.
ìI just remembered my Beretta!î Michaelson said as he reached down to his ankle holster.
ìOh, good!î Jerico said in a relief.
ìNow go!î Michaelson barked.
Jerico ran down the aisles of crates. Their pursuer fired shots at Jerico as he started running at him, loaded again! Michaelson jumped up from behind a crate and kept firing! Each shot hit the goon! He flew back into a few crates! They cracked open which revealed emergency parts for the engine and other mechanisms. Michaelson watched as the goon slowly died. Michaelson caught up with the rest of the gang.
ìMichaelson, Jerico, you ok?î Goodsport asked.
ìOf course. And that punk is dead!î Michaelson assured.
ìOh, so you got him huh?î Jerico asked.
ìYep. Each bullet into his now dead corpse. But letís concentrate on getting out of here.î Michaelson said.
ìRight!-ì Goodsport said.
The goon who was supposedly dead jumped from behind a crate and wrestled Michaelson to the floor!
ìWhoa!î Michaelson said as he stared up to the evil eyes of the DWO goon!
The goon raised his hand and punched Michaelson! Jerico ran and jumped feet first into Michaelsonís attacker. Kicking him off Michaelson, Jerico helped Michaelson to his feet and they ran as fast as possible! The goon got up and chased after them at top speed! Michaelson and Jerico rounded a corner to meet up with the gang who were at a door.
ìCome on!î Goodsport yelled as Jerico and Michaelson ran in.
Goodsport shut the heavy door. They were in a room with the readouts of the cloning machine.
ìSo now I see why they have a heavy hard to open door for this room. Seams top secret to me!î James commented. Ulla chuckled and gave him a flirting smile. James started to blush.
They heard a beeping noise and the door opened up. They turned to see the mad goon standing in the door way.
ìI thought I killed you!î Michaelson exclaimed.
ìWell this Dark World Order pilot donít give up to easily!î He said.
ìWait a minute, when it comes to mind ñ Those werenít DWO pilots we shot down before entering Valinor!î Michaelson said.
ìThatís correct. And to answer both questionsÖî The goon started to say.
He started to change, or morph, into a different pitch in color and shape and they made out who it was ñ Sauron!
ìWhoa, crap!î James exclaimed.
Sauron gave an evil grin.
ìAnd James I want you mostly! Lambert!î Sauron said as he reached out a hand to James as if James was going somewhere with him. Anger swelled in Aragorn at being face to face with Sauron again and Aagorn snapped!
Aragorn ran to tackle Sauron and went right through him! Falling flat on his face, Aragorn recovered rubbing his hand and in shock! He backed away and ran into the storage room not wanting to get in this affair with Sauron again. They all started to run so they can get past Sauron when suddenly James actually bumped into him!
ìYouíre coming with me my friend!î Sauron said.
Both him and James got engulfed in an orange ray of light! It disappeared and along with it James and Sauron! The rest of the gang got knocked off their feet. They looked back to see both James and Sauron gone!
ìNo!î Aragornís yells echoed through out the storage room. They then felt a jolt ñ The cloning machine finally landed on ground!

- - -

Indy, Meg, Brett, Alice, Shorty, and James walked through the ruins of the Phoenix Group base. They walked into the computer room which was hardly recognizable! They heard footsteps behind them and turned out of reaction.
ìMicah!î Indy exclaimed.
Suddenly they felt the Earth below them shake as if something under ground activated.

Ok, please! I need some comments on this chapter! Be honest.

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: Chapter XVII
: The downed pilot got up. He grabbed his gun and ran after Jerico and Michaelson. He fired a few shots which ricocheted off the crates. Michaelson and Jerico ducked as debris flied around them. Their pursuer reloaded after the many shots. Jerico and Michaelson stopped, out of breath.
: ìJerico, run!î Michaelson commanded.
: ìAnd leave you here?î Jerico replied.
: ìI just remembered my Beretta!î Michaelson said as he reached down to his ankle holster.
: ìOh, good!î Jerico said in a relief.
: ìNow go!î Michaelson barked.
: Jerico ran down the aisles of crates. Their pursuer fired shots at Jerico as he started running at him, loaded again! Michaelson jumped up from behind a crate and kept firing! Each shot hit the goon! He flew back into a few crates! They cracked open which revealed emergency parts for the engine and other mechanisms. Michaelson watched as the goon slowly died. Michaelson caught up with the rest of the gang.
: ìMichaelson, Jerico, you ok?î Goodsport asked.
: ìOf course. And that punk is dead!î Michaelson assured.
: ìOh, so you got him huh?î Jerico asked.
: ìYep. Each bullet into his now dead corpse. But letís concentrate on getting out of here.î Michaelson said.
: ìRight!-ì Goodsport said.
: The goon who was supposedly dead jumped from behind a crate and wrestled Michaelson to the floor!
: ìWhoa!î Michaelson said as he stared up to the evil eyes of the DWO goon!
: The goon raised his hand and punched Michaelson! Jerico ran and jumped feet first into Michaelsonís attacker. Kicking him off Michaelson, Jerico helped Michaelson to his feet and they ran as fast as possible! The goon got up and chased after them at top speed! Michaelson and Jerico rounded a corner to meet up with the gang who were at a door.
: ìCome on!î Goodsport yelled as Jerico and Michaelson ran in.
: Goodsport shut the heavy door. They were in a room with the readouts of the cloning machine.
: ìSo now I see why they have a heavy hard to open door for this room. Seams top secret to me!î James commented. Ulla chuckled and gave him a flirting smile. James started to blush.
: They heard a beeping noise and the door opened up. They turned to see the mad goon standing in the door way.
: ìI thought I killed you!î Michaelson exclaimed.
: ìWell this Dark World Order pilot donít give up to easily!î He said.
: ìWait a minute, when it comes to mind ñ Those werenít DWO pilots we shot down before entering Valinor!î Michaelson said.
: ìThatís correct. And to answer both questionsÖî The goon started to say.
: He started to change, or morph, into a different pitch in color and shape and they made out who it was ñ Sauron!
: ìWhoa, crap!î James exclaimed.
: Sauron gave an evil grin.
: ìAnd James I want you mostly! Lambert!î Sauron said as he reached out a hand to James as if James was going somewhere with him. Anger swelled in Aragorn at being face to face with Sauron again and Aagorn snapped!
: Aragorn ran to tackle Sauron and went right through him! Falling flat on his face, Aragorn recovered rubbing his hand and in shock! He backed away and ran into the storage room not wanting to get in this affair with Sauron again. They all started to run so they can get past Sauron when suddenly James actually bumped into him!
: ìYouíre coming with me my friend!î Sauron said. 
: Both him and James got engulfed in an orange ray of light! It disappeared and along with it James and Sauron! The rest of the gang got knocked off their feet. They looked back to see both James and Sauron gone!
: ìNo!î Aragornís yells echoed through out the storage room. They then felt a jolt ñ The cloning machine finally landed on ground!

:  - - -

: Indy, Meg, Brett, Alice, Shorty, and James walked through the ruins of the Phoenix Group base. They walked into the computer room which was hardly recognizable! They heard footsteps behind them and turned out of reaction.
: ìMicah!î Indy exclaimed.
: Suddenly they felt the Earth below them shake as if something under ground activated.

: Ok, please! I need some comments on this chapter! Be honest.

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