Great writting Tessa...

Posted by the Fiddler from www.sd131.k12.id.us on July 28, 1999 at 10:55:27:

In Reply to: Re: HELLOOOOOOOOO PEOPLE!! posted by Goodsport on July 28, 1999 at 09:49:20:

Great writting Tessa. There is just one thing. In the first half or three-quaters we get this image of Indy being this loving, caring, kind old man. But then suddenly he is "bitter" and "selfish." Maybe if we saw a little bit more of this bitterness and selfishness in the first parts it would be more beleivable, and not in such hard contrast with the Indy we see in the last little bit.

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