Hehe, Tess' never wrote an action sequence in her life!(NM)

Posted by Short Round from 1Cust146.tnt4.fort-lauderdale.fl.da.uu.net on November 09, 1999 at 15:25:50:

In Reply to: Chapter 7 (again this can be changed) posted by Tessa on November 09, 1999 at 13:29:35:

: Chapter 7
: "Wait a minute, we can't go back to your place," Lauren exclaimed, "That's where they got us."
: "Do you have any suggestions?"
: "As a matter of fact, I do," as she looked around, "Where are we?"
: Anthony told her as she smiled and said, "We're only two blocks from there. Come one," tugging his arm.

: "Shorty!" Indy exclaimed, "What happened to you?"
: "Got attacked, then shot," he quipped.
: "What have you gotten yourself into, kid?"
: "It's what your daughter got into, Doctor Jones."
: "Where's my sister?" Eric asked.
: "She's with someone. A man. His name is Brody."
: "Brody? Anthony Brody?" Indy asked.
: Shorty shrugged as Indy explained quickly, "Medium built, brownish hair, and pale eyes."
: "That's him."
: "She's with Anthony, Dad, " Michael said, "We can rest easy a bit."
: Indy frowned and said, "Actually she's in worse trouble then she was before."

: Lauren and Anthony arrived at a flat in London's affleuntial side of town. She turned the key from her pocket and a whiff of stale air came out. Anthony was taken aback as he asked,
: "Who's place is this?"
: "My mom's," she said, "Actually my grandfather's when he was alive."
: "Have you even been here?"
: "When I was little," Lauren said turning on the lights and locking the doors, "We used to stay here for family vacations, but then Mom got sick and we'd never set a foot in here after that."
: "Why didn't your father sell it?"
: "I don't know. Mourning her memory, perhaps. Or he's forgotten about it. The last time we were here was when I was 13."
: He touched the fixtures and looked around the place. Lauren opened the curtains to reveal the cityscape of London and she said, "I remember Mom taking me onto the terrace when I had nightmares in the middle of the night. She told me how the stars sang to you."
: "Singing stars?" as he raised an eyebrow.
: "Mom was a romancist. She saw beauty in everything," her eyes glistening with tears.
: "You miss her, don't you?"
: Lauren nodded as she moved away from the window. Anthony looked at her and said, "I feel the same way about you."

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: : Chapter 7
: : "Wait a minute, we can't go back to your place," Lauren exclaimed, "That's where they got us."
: : "Do you have any suggestions?"
: : "As a matter of fact, I do," as she looked around, "Where are we?"
: : Anthony told her as she smiled and said, "We're only two blocks from there. Come one," tugging his arm.

: : "Shorty!" Indy exclaimed, "What happened to you?"
: : "Got attacked, then shot," he quipped.
: : "What have you gotten yourself into, kid?"
: : "It's what your daughter got into, Doctor Jones."
: : "Where's my sister?" Eric asked.
: : "She's with someone. A man. His name is Brody."
: : "Brody? Anthony Brody?" Indy asked.
: : Shorty shrugged as Indy explained quickly, "Medium built, brownish hair, and pale eyes."
: : "That's him."
: : "She's with Anthony, Dad, " Michael said, "We can rest easy a bit."
: : Indy frowned and said, "Actually she's in worse trouble then she was before."

: : Lauren and Anthony arrived at a flat in London's affleuntial side of town. She turned the key from her pocket and a whiff of stale air came out. Anthony was taken aback as he asked,
: : "Who's place is this?"
: : "My mom's," she said, "Actually my grandfather's when he was alive."
: : "Have you even been here?"
: : "When I was little," Lauren said turning on the lights and locking the doors, "We used to stay here for family vacations, but then Mom got sick and we'd never set a foot in here after that."
: : "Why didn't your father sell it?"
: : "I don't know. Mourning her memory, perhaps. Or he's forgotten about it. The last time we were here was when I was 13."
: : He touched the fixtures and looked around the place. Lauren opened the curtains to reveal the cityscape of London and she said, "I remember Mom taking me onto the terrace when I had nightmares in the middle of the night. She told me how the stars sang to you."
: : "Singing stars?" as he raised an eyebrow.
: : "Mom was a romancist. She saw beauty in everything," her eyes glistening with tears.
: : "You miss her, don't you?"
: : Lauren nodded as she moved away from the window. Anthony looked at her and said, "I feel the same way about you."

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