Thank you, everyone!!!:) nm

Posted by Indiana Jayne from klg-59-159.tm.net.my on December 25, 1999 at 01:01:59:

In Reply to: Can post my poem here? :) posted by Indiana Jayne on December 22, 1999 at 01:08:51:

: Hey, I'm a little shy on this post because this is the first time I'm contributing a poem. Hope I can actually post a poem here. It's the first poem I've ever written on Indy so umm...don't laugh, okay? It doesn't rhyme but it comes straight from my heart. Please give me a try on this one! It may sound a little weird though. After all, for me, this is a first. Here it goes:*ahem*

: The Burning by Indiana Jayne
: The stars shine heavenly down on him.,
: A hero he stands fearless yet soft,
: The gentle hazel eyes filled with care,
: Stares straight ahead but glimpses back,
: His heart is pure and strong,
: His hands are rough and blistered,
: His feet are sore and painful,
: Yet he keeps running and running,
: No matter how much it hurts,
: He'd sacrifice everything,
: Just to be there.

: He could bulid castles that touched the sky,
: But he is chained to the ground,
: He believes and his faith is ever powerful,
: You could be a snake and he'll still care,
: You could be him and he'll lead you there,
: You could be anyone or anything,
: He still sees you,
: And he'll always will.

: The fire is bright and blazing,
: A frightened dame looks up from the flames,
: She sees hope from a knight of the pure,
: Then, all the fear diappears,
: He assures her and puts faith in her hands,
: She holds tight and he carries her spirit,
: Out of the dark forces.

: They are out and alive,
: She embraces his courage,
: He embraces her insecurity,
: And turns them into diamonds,
: She gazes into his loving eyes,
: Unleashing her ever flowing gratitude,
: He accepts but his silence wished for a mystery that shrouds,
: She's thankful,
: He's fallen into her open arms,
: Even though he has not.

: He stares straight ahead but his heart is back with her,
: She takes his hands in hers and slowly, he turns around.
: *******

: It sucks, doesn't it? What do you people REALLY, REALLY think?

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