Can I make some changes to my last chapter (30)?

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Posted by Deirdre Campbell from 192.169.39.66 on July 29, 1999 at 04:15:51:

You see, I think the ending of that one was pretty "dry"...and *smirk* there ought to be at least a teeny weeny bit of romantic notion in this "stranger" story. So here goes... (and please don't hate me for this)

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(somewhere near the end of Chapter 30>

.... Indiana Jerico fired once and hit Groo right in between his two eyes. The Oakleys, Groo had been wearing, fell from his face, revealing venom green horrified eyes, that bore into Jerico's expressionless black ones. Vengence has been paid. Clenching his fists, Jerico watched yet another body fell to the ground .

Then it was still in the deserted cathedral-like library.

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"MeganÖ" softly Jerico lifted her head and examined her wound. Luckily the bullet had missed her heart by inches and hit her in
her left shoulderblade. "You hard-headed idiot!"he fuzzed as he pulled off his shirt and rolled it together, in order to cushion her head, "What the HELL did think you were doing?! I told you to stay OUT of this! Do you have any idea how dangerous that was!?! You could've been .. killed! You know what you are?! You ...are... a--."
Smiling a bit, she silenced his lips with the tip of her fingers whispering hoarsely. "Jerico?"
He bent down to her,frightened that she had been hurt elsewhere, internally "Yes?"
Meg slipped her arms around his neck and pulled him down.
"Just shut up and kiss me."


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In the distance,oblivious to them, the howling of the approaching police and ambulance could be heard.


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Okay Meg, you can now go ahead and kill me...

Deirdre





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