Oops, I meant the MP-40! (nm)

Posted by Goodsport from adsl-216-102-199-185.dsl.snfc21.pacbell.net on January 11, 2000 at 22:10:59:

In Reply to: Uhhh... the MP-10 wasnt invented until long after the Uzi Goodsport, try something older. [nm] posted by the Fiddler on January 11, 2000 at 22:09:44:

: : ... I'll have to replace the 'Uzi' in your chapter (I'm assuming that's what you meant when you wrote 'oozie') with 'MP-10 submachinegun'. It turns out that the Uzi was developed in Israel (now THAT must have made Hitler turn in his grave! :D ) in the early 1950's, and wasn't issued until 1955. The German Army eventually adopted the Uzi as its official submachinegun, but not until a lot later! :)

: : On a side note, the Mini-Uzi wasn't issued until 1980 (just thought I'd throw that in).

: : As for that last scene (with Indiana Rigg's airplane)... is it all right if I change it somewhat? It somewhat conflicts with a lot of what happened before:

: : 1) Goodsport just got there... and he's a private investigator, not a scuba-diver.

: : 2) Indiana Riggs had just jumped out of the plane at the end of Chapter 3.

: : 3) Goodsport's private-investigating partner was killed a month earlier, and Goodsport doesn't currently have a partner (only his name is written on the door of his office now, according to Chapter 1 - remember?).

: : 4) Etc.

: :
: : I promise to try and keep it as close as possible to your original vision, though. :)

: : Overall, great chapter. And I hope that you're feeling better soon! :D

: :
: : -G

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: : : ... I'll have to replace the 'Uzi' in your chapter (I'm assuming that's what you meant when you wrote 'oozie') with 'MP-10 submachinegun'. It turns out that the Uzi was developed in Israel (now THAT must have made Hitler turn in his grave! :D ) in the early 1950's, and wasn't issued until 1955. The German Army eventually adopted the Uzi as its official submachinegun, but not until a lot later! :)

: : : On a side note, the Mini-Uzi wasn't issued until 1980 (just thought I'd throw that in).

: : : As for that last scene (with Indiana Rigg's airplane)... is it all right if I change it somewhat?  It somewhat conflicts with a lot of what happened before:

: : : 1) Goodsport just got there... and he's a private investigator, not a scuba-diver.

: : : 2)  Indiana Riggs had just jumped out of the plane at the end of Chapter 3.

: : : 3) Goodsport's private-investigating partner was killed a month earlier, and Goodsport doesn't currently have a partner (only his name is written on the door of his office now, according to Chapter 1 - remember?).

: : : 4)  Etc.

: : : 
: : : I promise to try and keep it as close as possible to your original vision, though.   :)

: : : Overall, great chapter.  And I hope that you're feeling better soon!   :D

: : : 
: : : -G

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