Correction in Chapter 4...

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Posted by Goodsport from adsl-216-102-199-185.dsl.snfc21.pacbell.net on January 19, 2000 at 00:13:33:

In Reply to: Chapter 4 of Indiana Jones and the Golden Spider posted by Goodsport on January 18, 2000 at 12:39:39:

In the paragraph right before the picture of the diver, the sentence:

"As they both were sweeping away the fins on their feet, one of them seemed to be fiddling with the plane's controls while the other stood at the doorway looking out."

should be

"As they both were sweeping away the spiders near them with the fins on their feet, one of them seemed to be fiddling with the plane's controls while the other stood at the doorway, looking out."

Sorry about the confusion! :(


-G





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