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Posted by . from cujo.brio.com on February 22, 2000 at 11:53:45:

you seem like a nice guy and i dont want to hurt your feelings but your chapter 8 sux. it has nothing to do with the other chapters

im not saying this to hurt your feelings but because you hurt the other authors feelings. they put in a lot of time and effort writing their chapters and your chapter put everything to a grinding halt. youll probably tell me that i should write a chapter if i think i can do better. no i am not a writer, but even i would have enough courtesy not to write a chapter if i havent kept up with the chapters before

and please dont give me "im only 14 years old" excuse. so is indiana jayne but her chapter showed effort in keeping with the story. and english isnt even her first language, i think its malaysian or something

sorry to make you mad. i guess youll flame me now.

Follow Ups:

• Kiss my ass and put that suggestion up your ass, bitch(NM) Short Round 14:57:00 2/22/2000 (10)
  • What's with the name-calling? :( (nm) Goodsport 21:19:32 2/22/2000 (0)
  • Shorty.. Riggs 15:39:24 2/22/2000 (8)
    • I know, but I never liked him in the first place(NM) Short Round 16:14:55 2/22/2000 (7)
      • you never knew me in the first place. and i take back my apology and about you being a nice guy [nm] . 16:24:54 2/22/2000 (6)
        • Thanx, you can have it back... Short Round 16:45:25 2/22/2000 (5)
          • . is my reg nic, and i should never have apologized to someone who never gave a dam if he hurt people [nm] . 16:51:26 2/22/2000 (4)
            • We(Me and Brett) know you're Fweep!!!!(NM) Short Round 15:07:49 2/23/2000 (3)
              • Please... Riggs 16:43:14 2/23/2000 (0)
              • why do you keep calling me names? whats wrong with you? and whats a fweep? [nm] . 16:13:23 2/23/2000 (1)
                • Fweep is.................. Fweep is, is! A dude! And uh...... yeah. He/She is someone. Not an IT(NM) Short Round 16:30:59 2/23/2000 (0)

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