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Posted by Deirdre Campbell from 208.142.142.18 on February 27, 2000 at 22:43:55:

In Reply to: What am I supposed to redo shorty's? [nm] posted by the Fiddler on February 27, 2000 at 14:20:29:


How about you revise it. Add some things (delete some scenes) and make it more related to Jayne's last chapter; for continuity's sake. Try supplying possible answers to the questions posted (eg. What happened to Muppet, is he dead?;What was Deirdre blabbering about? Where is James? Is Meg still unconscious? Who killed so and so and etcetc), if that wouldn't be too much for you (don't want to sound too demanding).

Suggestion: Since it is your turn, wouldn't it be fitting for you to incorporate that ICQ dialogue we had (remember *g*)? That would be a good continuation for those characters, instead of Shorty's version.
The latter from which you could take some suitable scenes from. However I don't see the point (for a detective) of acquiring so many firearms at this part in the story, especially since he doesn't yet know who his opponents really are, nor does it seem likely that the police force, detectives and P.I's don't have weapons already.

If you have any questions regarding this, feel free to contact me over email. I'd be glad to be of help.


Yours truly,
Deirdre C.



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