Goodsport, and Deirdre...

Posted by the Fiddler from IDFAB105-27.splitrock.net on February 27, 2000 at 23:54:39:

In Reply to: Fiddler: posted by Deirdre Campbell on February 27, 2000 at 22:43:55:

K, first of all DO I have Shorty's OK to redo/rewrite/modify his chapter???

Thanks for posting that stuff Goodsport, I'll keep those points in mind. But remember, if all isn't answered by the end of the story, well that's the way things go... don't anyone try and write just to explain things left open ended from earlier chapters, write good chapters, and if you can work the answer to earlier questions into it then great!

: How about you revise it. Add some things (delete some scenes) and make it more related to Jayne's last chapter; for continuity's sake. Try supplying possible answers to the questions posted (eg. What happened to Muppet, is he dead?;What was Deirdre blabbering about? Where is James? Is Meg still unconscious? Who killed so and so and etcetc), if that wouldn't be too much for you (don't want to sound too demanding).

Alright, I'll get on it.

: Suggestion: Since it is your turn, wouldn't it be fitting for you to incorporate that ICQ dialogue we had (remember *g*)? That would be a good continuation for those characters, instead of Shorty's version.
: The latter from which you could take some suitable scenes from. However I don't see the point (for a detective) of acquiring so many firearms at this part in the story, especially since he doesn't yet know who his opponents really are, nor does it seem likely that the police force, detectives and P.I's don't have weapons already.

K, first of all, I wrote that part... feeling it was an appropriate lead up. My character carried a Colt 1910 in a shoulder holster, he thought that if some people had tried to murder your character before, they might try again. So he got himself a Tommy-gun and a way to hide it while walking down the street.
I have asked and other people liked this part also, so I think I'll leave it, unless you totaly dis-approve.

: If you have any questions regarding this, feel free to contact me over email. I'd be glad to be of help.

I might do that.

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=)

--the Fiddler

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