but that story eventually had old indiana jones in it. in the end he even turned into indiana jones looking like harrison ford [nm]

Posted by . from cujo.brio.com on February 28, 2000 at 14:14:00:

In Reply to: Well neither was the Tessa And the Stranger On The Plane story which was here before you came(NM) posted by Short Round on February 28, 2000 at 14:04:45:

: : : Here it is. I'm plotting and such. It's a western about me, Brett, and James. Here it goes, roll 'em:

: : : Three figures walk into a town

: : : NARRATOR: The town of Newland was like a city of hell until Brett Lambert and his brothers arrived!

: : : Brett stands in front of a corral which has two guys walking out of it

: : : BRETT: I got two guns. One for each of ya's!

: : : Cut to Shorty walking into a salloon. A man at the bar turns toward him and flashes keys in front of his face

: : : MAN IN FRONT OF BAR: Looking for these?

: : : James backs away slowly as he fires towards two guys coming out of a bank. Cut to James shooting all these men down like a peice of cake! Cut to Brett in a barn shooting men behind hay stacks and on the platform above. Cut to Shorty in salloon shooting down two guys at a table and a guy near the stairs.

: : : Cut to man running down the middle of the road yelling.
: : : MAN RUNNING DOWN MIDDLE OF ROAD: Strangers!

: : : Cut to all three brothers shooting back and forth at guys on a ridge. Another cut to man flying and landing in a pond!

: : : NARRATOR: Three brothers in a search for Newland's freedom!

: : : Cut to the first scene of the trailer when the three brothers walk down the street.

: : : NARRATOR: And a conflict with outlaws alike!

: : : Rapidly cutting to scenes of men about to draw

: : : NARRATOR: Starring Brett Lambert as Brett the Kid!

: : : Cut to Brett firing gun at camera.

: : : NARRATOR: James Lambert as Big James!

: : : Cut to James running back and shooting three men at near a horse trough.

: : : NARRATOR: Short Round McFly as Short Gun!

: : : Cut to Shorty walking in salloon

: : : NARRATOR: Micah Johnson as the Prospector!

: : : Cut to Micah in front of screen.

: : : MICAH: Howdy stranger!

: : : NARRATOR: And Kent Allard as Mad Dog Kent

: : : Cut to Mad Dog Kent taking out a cigar from his mouth

: : : Another cut to Mad Dog Kent pointing gun at screen

: : : KENT: I thought so stranger!

: : : As he pulls trigger, a quick cut to a mine exploding.

: : : NARRATOR: Star in... The Bounty of Mad Dog Kent!

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But it originally started out as a Forum Adventure until Indy was introduced in I think chapter fifty something(NM) Short Round 15:59:28 2/28/2000 (15)
- indiana jones was introduced in chapter 37. its a good thing he was introduced since this is an indiana jones ffforum :) [nm] . 16:05:43 2/28/2000 (14)
  - Alright, then big deal it's just another story about forum members it don't do any harm(NM) Short Round 17:20:34 2/28/2000 (1)
    - everybody will be sad and depressed :( [nm] . 17:53:15 2/28/2000 (0)
  - after that chapter, the only authors that seemed to acknowledge that indiana jones was in the story was goodsport, jerico, deirdre and tessa. and on an indiana jones ffforum :( [nm] . 16:11:11 2/28/2000 (11)
    - But it wasn't originally intended be about Indy. It was intended to be about the forum members(NM) Short Round 18:15:12 2/28/2000 (10)
      - the tessa story was good to begin with but got a LOT better when indy was introduced and actually did stuff. sadly that only seemed to be in those four authors chapters but not in the others [nm] . 18:31:28 2/28/2000 (9)
        
        Well... Goodsport 22:53:13 2/28/2000 (8)
        
        Re: Well... Indiana James (Lambert) 18:51:43 3/02/2000 (7)
        
        Re: Well... Goodsport 00:50:54 3/03/2000 (6)
        
        *shrugs* Indiana James (Lambert) 18:24:21 3/03/2000 (5)
        
        Re: *shrugs* Goodsport 23:09:51 3/03/2000 (4)
        
        Well, sir Goodsport... Indiana James (Lambert) 19:45:54 3/04/2000 (3)
        
        Well, sir James... Goodsport 11:03:32 3/05/2000 (2)
        
        Re: Well, sir James... Indiana James (Lambert) 20:24:47 3/05/2000 (1)
        
        Re: Well, sir James... Goodsport 03:42:57 3/07/2000 (0)
in case youre wondering, i read the story last week :) [nm] . 14:15:51 2/28/2000 (0)

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: : : : Here it is. I'm plotting and such. It's a western about me, Brett, and James. Here it goes, roll 'em:

: : : : Three figures walk into a town

: : : : NARRATOR: The town of Newland was like a city of hell until Brett Lambert and his brothers arrived!

: : : : Brett stands in front of a corral which has two guys walking out of it

: : : : BRETT: I got two guns. One for each of ya's!

: : : : Cut to Shorty walking into a salloon. A man at the bar turns toward him and flashes keys in front of his face

: : : : MAN IN FRONT OF BAR: Looking for these?

: : : : James backs away slowly as he fires towards two guys coming out of a bank. Cut to James shooting all these men down like a peice of cake! Cut to Brett in a barn shooting men behind hay stacks and on the platform above. Cut to Shorty in salloon shooting down two guys at a table and a guy near the stairs.

: : : : Cut to man running down the middle of the road yelling.
: : : : MAN RUNNING DOWN MIDDLE OF ROAD: Strangers!

: : : : Cut to all three brothers shooting back and forth at guys on a ridge. Another cut to man flying and landing in a pond!

: : : : NARRATOR: Three brothers in a search for Newland's freedom!

: : : : Cut to the first scene of the trailer when the three brothers walk down the street.

: : : : NARRATOR: And a conflict with outlaws alike!

: : : : Rapidly cutting to scenes of men about to draw

: : : : NARRATOR: Starring Brett Lambert as Brett the Kid!

: : : : Cut to Brett firing gun at camera.

: : : : NARRATOR: James Lambert as Big James!

: : : : Cut to James running back and shooting three men at near a horse trough.

: : : : NARRATOR: Short Round McFly as Short Gun!

: : : : Cut to Shorty walking in salloon

: : : : NARRATOR: Micah Johnson as the Prospector!

: : : : Cut to Micah in front of screen.

: : : : MICAH: Howdy stranger!

: : : : NARRATOR: And Kent Allard as Mad Dog Kent

: : : : Cut to Mad Dog Kent taking out a cigar from his mouth

: : : : Another cut to Mad Dog Kent pointing gun at screen

: : : : KENT: I thought so stranger!

: : : : As he pulls trigger, a quick cut to a mine exploding.

: : : : NARRATOR: Star in... The Bounty of Mad Dog Kent!

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