Objections!

Posted by Deirdre Campbell from 216.6.34.40 on March 02, 2000 at 06:28:22:

Hi,

This might come a bit late, since the new chapter logs have already been posted (actually I had been planning to tell Goodsport not to post them yet) but due to some inconsistencies in Chapter 8, may I please request for another revision?

Fiddler I mean no harm, your chapter was good. However I can't sleep, thinking of some things that you unintentionally missed out (e.g. Why your character is here at this part and appears somewhere else without explaination/s--- it's very unhealthy for me and my lifestyle *sigh* so pls. bear with post-traumatic me). =}

All I am going to do is fill in some gaps (not delete anything important, just minor stuff for revision -- you are still the author of the chapter).

Chapter 9 will be up by next week for sure and I promise everyone to give you a suspense-filled, action packed and semi-surreal chapter that you won't forget so easily (*vision*: Indyfans waking up screaming in the middle of the night, sweating profusely and becoming paranoid... hehe).

Helps save the endangered species!

Deirdre Campbell

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I wonder how many let downs and drafts of Chapter 8 there'll be(NM) Short Round 16:09:29 3/02/2000 (2)
- the latest chapter 8 was great. i think that deirdre just wants to fill it out a little [nm] . 16:19:33 3/02/2000 (1)
  - Thank you for agreeing,& Yes, I just want to fill-in some minor details.[ns] DC 00:30:44 3/03/2000 (0)
Wait a minute... the Fiddler 12:56:48 3/02/2000 (10)
- Oh, and it's a healthy jump in time, not every last minute can be covered. [nm] the Fiddler 13:01:16 3/02/2000 (9)
  - Re: Oh, and it's a healthy jump in time, not every last minute can be covered. [nm] . 13:43:27 3/02/2000 (8)
    - HUH? the Fiddler 20:12:36 3/02/2000 (3)
      - Between us only. DC 07:51:53 3/03/2000 (2)
        
        It's OK, I've cooled down =) [nm] the Fiddler 12:35:34 3/03/2000 (0)
        
        *Keeps his mouth shut before he gets fiddler in trouble again and fiddler denies knowing him like webley was about to do*(NM) Short Round 09:07:58 3/03/2000 (0)
    - Why are you always so negative about everything? (nm) Indigo 15:20:39 3/02/2000 (0)
    - I don't know what this is about, but I'll just go along with fiddler for the heck of him(NIM) Short Round 14:01:51 3/02/2000 (2)
      - dont go along with anyone, ESPECIALLY if you dont know what its about. deirdre and fiddler can each take care of themselves [nm] . 14:17:53 3/02/2000 (1)
        
        although i did agree with deirdre on this one ;) [nm] . 14:34:11 3/02/2000 (0)

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: This might come a bit late, since the new chapter logs have already been posted (actually I had been planning to tell Goodsport not to post them yet) but due to some inconsistencies in Chapter 8, may I please request for another revision?

: Fiddler I mean no harm, your chapter was good.  However I can't sleep, thinking of some things that you unintentionally missed out (e.g. Why your character is here at this part and appears somewhere else without explaination/s--- it's very unhealthy for me and my lifestyle *sigh* so pls. bear with post-traumatic me). =}

: All I am going to do is fill in some gaps (not delete anything important, just minor stuff for revision -- you are still the author of the chapter).

: Chapter 9 will be up by next week for sure and I promise everyone to give you a suspense-filled, action packed and semi-surreal chapter that you won't forget so easily (*vision*: Indyfans waking up screaming in the middle of the night, sweating profusely and becoming paranoid... hehe).

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