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Posted by the Fiddler from IDFAB102-32.splitrock.net on March 02, 2000 at 20:12:36:

In Reply to: Re: Oh, and it's a healthy jump in time, not every last minute can be covered. [nm] posted by . on March 02, 2000 at 13:43:27:

: not every minute needs to be covered but that was too huge a jump in time. it was never explained how fiddler knew he would need a tommygun. not even explained as a hunch.

First of all, they blew the hell out of an auditorium filled with people, what more confirmation do you need that they will try again???


: and it was not explained why he is still walking with her after she told him everything she knew. and what about the e mail she gave him in chapter 5?

Who says she told him everything???? At the end of the last chapter she had just begun to tell him something new... that was never finished. I don't call that "everything she knew."


: no offense fiddler, but deirdre is right. i hope she doesnt remove anything since your chapter was cool. i just hope she fills in the blanks.

She's not changing anything unless I tell her she can. And unless I get some good reasons to change it, nobody's going to.... I'd prefer someone tell me some things that are legitimately wrong, then I will correct my own chapter.


--the Fiddler


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