Indiana James...

Posted by Goodsport from 216.32.185.198 on August 04, 1999 at 13:23:48:

In Reply to: Re: Your answers, Deirdre. :) posted by Indiana James (Lambert) on August 04, 1999 at 12:24:37:

: Well, you see, the doctor could see old man Brett because it was near the front entrance (windows+sun=light=sight) unless it was set in the middle of the night, then we made an BIG error. AND, no Goodsport and Indiana Jones were NOT killed by Aragorn, that wasn't what we were intending, he just dropped them off at a "Subway" restaurant.

Actually it did take place at night, although I forgot to mention that (sorry about that). I guess if they were near the entrace, though, the doctor could kind of see "old man" Brett with the moonlight streaming in through the glass entrance. The semi-darkness could even explain why the doctor didn't immediately know that Brett wasn't an old man. :)

: Anyways, sorry for the confusion that was caused. I guess we wanted to put too much plot twists to explain. Sorry for the "huh?" inducing chapter. But don't take it away! I love the twists! Maybe a sentence or two can be added to it so the confusion can be cleared up.

I thought the twists were pretty interesting. Is it all right if I "add" to the chapter to explain a few confusing details? I promise not to change the main content of the chapter! :D

-G

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By all means yes! Indiana James (Lambert) 13:37:45 8/04/99 (2)
- Re: By all means yes! Goodsport 13:40:16 8/04/99 (1)
  - Excellent! It's all falling into place! (nim) Indiana James (Lambert) 14:12:31 8/04/99 (0)

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: : Well, you see, the doctor could see old man Brett because it was near the front entrance (windows+sun=light=sight) unless it was set in the middle of the night, then we made an BIG error.  AND, no Goodsport and Indiana Jones were NOT killed by Aragorn, that wasn't what we were intending, he just dropped them off at a "Subway" restaurant.

: Actually it did take place at night, although I forgot to mention that (sorry about that).  I guess if they were near the entrace, though, the doctor could kind of see "old man" Brett with the moonlight streaming in through the glass entrance.  The semi-darkness could even explain why the doctor didn't immediately know that Brett wasn't an old man.   :)

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: : Anyways, sorry for the confusion that was caused.  I guess we wanted to put too much plot twists to explain.  Sorry for the "huh?" inducing chapter.  But don't take it away!  I love the twists!  Maybe a sentence or two can be added to it so the confusion can be cleared up.

: I thought the twists were pretty interesting.  Is it all right if I "add" to the chapter to explain a few confusing details?  I promise not to change the main content of the chapter!   :D

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