Uhm, conflicting points in the "Tessa" fanfic guys. Mind clearing these up?

Posted by Indiana Jerico from 208.162.27.83 on July 23, 1999 at 19:41:59:

On Chapter 21, how did The Man in the Hat knew that Aragorn and the others have Indiana James and the Fiddler?

On Chapter 23, Brett decided to hop on a plane for Poland. Uhm, wasn't it already established that Brett is already in Poland? He went there together with Aragorn.

On Chapter 21, I could add something to explain that. Here it is.

---(Chapter 21 revised to explain something):

As they entered their room Tessa insisted she needed to use the bathroom and went straight in.
The Man in the Hat shrugged as he sat down on the bed. He covered his face with his hands and sighed. How am I s'pposed to carry out my mission? he thought. He thought about contacting Big Boss Nobody, or Deirdre. He was about to pick up the phone when it rang. He hesitated, then picked it up.
"Hello?"
"Listen up, Man in the Hat," a muffled voice said. It was electronically disguised. "They're onto you now. An elite agency wants to save Tessa. They've already got two of your friends, Indiana James and the Fiddler."
"Who's this???" The Man in the Hat said.
The voice laughed evilly. "Be grateful I told you this. They're your friends, right? You wouldn't want to desert James and the Fiddler, wouldn't you?"
"Wait! I..."
"Here's Aragorn's number," the voice said. It dictated the number and The Man in the Hat hastily wrote it dow.
"Look, thank you but I need..."
The line went dead.
The Man in the Hat looked at the phone for a moment. Then, still making sure that Tessa's in the bathroom, he dialed the number the voice gave him.
: "Hello?" came the voice from the other end.
: "Listen up, you have a couple of my friends, I have one of yours. Here is what happens: we are going to trade. I give you Tessa, you give me Indiana James and the Fiddler."
: "Wait... Who..."
: Cutting Aragorn off The Man with the Hat continued:
: "Here is how it happens: we meet about a quarter mile apart, you release Lambert and Fiddler and I release Tessa, they walk toward eachother, passing in the middle, they each reach their friends about the same time. Then I have my associates back and you have yours. Is that understood?"
: "Yes... bu..."
: Interupting again The Man with the Hat went on to arrange a time and a place--a rural area about two hours from Warsaw.

Hope that clears it up! Good job, people!

Follow Ups:

• Don't worry... Goodsport 20:31:32 7/23/99 (5)
  • Re: Don't worry... Deirdre Campbell(the typo queen) 22:29:32 7/23/99 (2)
    • Re: Don't worry... Goodsport 01:06:35 7/24/99 (1)
      • Those pics.... Deirdre 10:18:55 7/24/99 (0)
  • Oh, I forgot to mention... Goodsport 20:34:00 7/23/99 (1)
    • Sounds good. Just delete the "Warsaw" in the "Warsaw public Library" and replace it with another name. (nim) Indiana Jerico 20:39:25 7/23/99 (0)
• Ok, now it makes more sense!! Good writing! NM Meg 20:17:18 7/23/99 (0)
• Really? Brett (Yasim) Lambert 19:55:25 7/23/99 (3)
  • I'm writing Chapter 25 right now. I already put it there that you're in Poland, Brett. Don't worry, it's a minor thing. (nm) Indiana Jerico 20:17:34 7/23/99 (2)
    • jerico I'm so sorry, I wrote a chapter 25, but it's not that long so you could add on to it, or just ignore it and go on with yours since you write much better than I do. Sorry for the trouble! NM Meg 20:21:11 7/23/99 (1)
      • Or we could pool together! (nm) Indiana Jerico 20:36:35 7/23/99 (0)

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