Posted by Aaron from usr1-modem059.runestone.net on May 27, 1998 at 15:13:33:
In Reply to: Forum Novel to get permanent home posted by Micah on May 26, 1998 at 20:05:36:
I just read the whole story over, and I'm properly impressed! Thanks Micah!
Just one point: sometimes I tend to write long conversations with no "he said" or "she asked" in between, and it can be pretty hard to follow who said what. Some of those long narrative sections made it into my Forum Novel contributions, and on the WWW pages, it looks as if Indy or Drake is holding a conversation with themselves. :) My fault for writing it that way, sorry. Just remember, when old "s end and new ones begin, someone else is talking. I'll try to avoid this style of writing in future chapters.
Thanks again, it looks great!
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