Re: Great writting Tessa...

Posted by Tessa from 138.87.169.47 on July 28, 1999 at 11:47:18:

In Reply to: Great writting Tessa... posted by the Fiddler on July 28, 1999 at 10:55:27:

I was trying of how Indy's feelings was towards Lauren's mother. Mainly because of how my mom is loving and caring but if we uncover anything about my father(who passed away when I was 13) that she doesn't want anyone else to see, she goes berserk.
Tessa

: Great writting Tessa. There is just one thing. In the first half or three-quaters we get this image of Indy being this loving, caring, kind old man. But then suddenly he is "bitter" and "selfish." Maybe if we saw a little bit more of this bitterness and selfishness in the first parts it would be more beleivable, and not in such hard contrast with the Indy we see in the last little bit.

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